A2 LL - CUPCAKES QUESTION ON THE WAR IN PASSAIC

Read the source material which follows and answer both questions:
Text A is from an article entitled [The War in Passic - from 'The present Passaic strikes' on page 108 to the end of the text]by [Mary Heaton Vorce]

It was first published in [Nation in 1926].

 

[Produce a letter to your MP asking for the new law against night working to be repealed.]

You should adapt the source material, using your own words as far as possible. Your [letter]
should be approximately 300 – 400 words in length.

In your adaptation you should:

• use language appropriately to address purpose and audience

• write accurately and coherently, applying relevant ideas and concepts.

(25 marks)

AND

Question 3

 

Write a commentary which explains the choices you made when writing your [letter]
commenting on the following:

• how language and form have been used to suit audience and purpose

• how vocabulary and other stylistic features have been used to shape meaning and

achieve particular effects.

 

You should aim to write about 150 – 250 words in this commentary.

(15 marks)