Monday 20 June 2016

A2 LL - CUPCAKES - NOTES FOR FALL OF THE BERLIN WALL BY ANN LESLIE


1.  Incredible, fantastic, unbelievable  Lots of people couldn’t believe that this freedom, liberation was really happening
2.  A lot of people,!! Grand masses, overwhelming crowds, hordes, felt like a festival.
3.  Sudden freedom of movement between East and West Berlin – bird set free from a cage
4.  People were climbing on the wall and dancing
 
5.  The wall, towers and the barbed wire were no longer objects of terror
6.  But the violent parts of their jobs no longer exists - relief, thankful
7.  The border guards let thousands of people through without checking them
8.  Border guards were worried about the workload – comparative pair – small work load increase to overwhelming
 
9.  People didn’t worry about the Stasi
10.  Divided families were able to be reunited
11.  The fall of the wall came about due to the work of the presidents of the USSR and the US
 
12.  Hopeful about the future

 
I don’t have the words yet Klaus to tell you that I probably won’t have to arrest or shoot anybody for crossing this border anymore.
·      Emotive language
·      Hedging
·      Direct address – personal pronoun and proper name
·      Semantic field – violence
·      Declarative
·      Ellipsis – don’t