2000 WORD ESSAY
EQUUS - HOMEWORK
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For the class I share with Kay this must be handed in on Monday 14 October in class.
- For the class I share with Jerome this must be handed in on Wednesday 16 October in class.
Write three analytical paragraphs on the presentation of Alan Strang in the
first 7 scenes of the play. And write three paragraphs on the presentation of
Martin Dysart in the first scenes of the play.
Here are a few main points to help you write about
Alan. He is presented as a child, with provocative and challenging behaviour
and he is dominated by his parents that have conflicting ways of seeing their
world.
Here are a few main points to help you write about
Dysart. He is presented as professional, doubts the meaning and purpose of his
job, is fascinated by the case of Alan Strang.
Below is a guide to help you structure your paragraphs
FEATURE
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COMMENT
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1 Make a point
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Write one simple and straightforward point
relevant to your overall topic
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2 Expand on point
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Write a more complex sentence that is more
focussed, specific and detailed
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Introduce quote
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Introduce the quotation you are just about to
use. One way to do this is by referring to the immediate context of the quote
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3 Evidence
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Quote no more than a word or phrase. Be very
selective. Choose quotations that you can write a lot about.
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4 General point
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Show how the quotation addresses the point made
at the opening of the paragraph
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5 Literary points
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Comment on a literary feature or features
expressed through the quotation.
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6 Effect on reader
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Comment on the effect the poetic techniques used
in the quotation have on you / us as readers of the poem.
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AN EXAMPLE
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Hughes describes nature as a powerful force.
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In the poem The Horses Hughes sets the scene at
dawn. A dramatic moment of transformation from darkness to light
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An example of this power can be seen in the poem
The Horses where he describes the sun rising.
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‘Then the sun
Orange, red, red erupted’
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The dawn is presented as an act of apocalyptic
violence that appears to affect the whole earth.
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Hughes uses colours associated with the element of fire. Connotations of the colour ‘red’
include blood, danger and destruction. The noun is repeated to
help give emphasis. The verb ‘erupted’ is associated with
volcanoes, one of the most violent and destructive forces of nature on the
planet.
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We are drawn to the bright colours, they are
dynamic and interesting. And this contrasts strongly with the ‘black’ and
‘grey’ earlier in the poem.
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