Monday 5 March 2012

A2 LL - Unprepared Commentary - More Basics

The Basic Figures

90 minutes to answer the question.

30 minutes to read, annotate and plan the commentary
50 minutes to write the answer
10 minutes to read and edit

The Plan - the first twenty minutes

Annotate the texts fully using a pencil - notes in the margin, underline, circle words/phrases

First Reading
  • Quickly identify audience, purpose and genre - the general and text introduction will help you address these issues
  • How is the theme presented in each text?
  • What is the attitude each narrator has towards the theme
  • What is the basic structure of each text?
  • What different kinds of writing can you identfy in the texts - link this to the main genre of each text you are studying. 
  • Identify the key linguistic and literary features of each text - be aware of rhetorical and spoken language features in each text 

Second Reading
  • Carefully identify quotations you can use to support your responses to audience, purposes and genre. Identify quotations that you can write a lot about.
  • Be really clear about the similarities and differences in the presentation of the linking theme between all three texts. Find evidence.
  • Also be really clear about the similarities and differences in attitudes towards the linking theme in all three texts. Find evidence.
  • Find examples of the different sub-genres of writing in each text. For example descriptive writing, dialogue, narrative.
  • Identify as clearly as possible the different effects on the audience created by the various literary and linguistic techniques in each text.
Bullet Points - the last five minutes
  • Draw up a list of bullet points using whatever commentary structure best suites you. Remember that each bullet point represents a paragraph
  • Write the points you feel most confident about first of all.
  • With each bullet point make a brief note identifying the quote you are going to use.
  • And briefly note what features you are going to comment on for each bullet point.
  • Number each bullet point according to the order you are going to write the commentary.