Thursday 16 May 2013

AS ENGLISH LITERATURE - JANE EYRE - TIMED ESSAY FEEDBACK

Here are some general and specific comments on the timed essays you wrote on Jane Eyre.

GENERAL

In each paragraph you should aim to quote and make a commentary on the quote. Your commentary should include a statement responding to the topic sentence - and therefore the essay title, identify a language feature in the quote, a statement about its effect on readers and or other characters.

The essay must include some paragraphs that include comments on contexts, how the texts were considered by critics or referring to the genre of the time and theoretical perspectives such as feminism or Marxism.

If you can't quote describe a specific episode in detail and concisely as possible, identify a writing style associated with the episode you are writing about and comment on this.

For example if you are writing about the Gothic: refer to the red room. We know it contains the colour red and the colour white. We know Jane is isolated. And that her uncle died in this room. We know the room is unused and we know the servants avoid going in there at night. So refer to colour symbolism, descriptive language, dark foreboding atmosphere - this is emphasised by the growing darkness - pathetic fallacy!

It should be possible to refer to the role of women within this society. Refer to their status, their relationship to men, their opportunities in life.

GOTHIC

Gothic episodes and images that spring to my mind include:

The red room, Thornfield Hall - the setting, the meeting with Rochester on the road to Hay, the fire in Rochester's room, the attack on Richard Mason by Bertha, the destruction of the tree by lightening at their proposal, Bertha's visit to Jane the night before the wedding and the tearing of her Vail, the ruin of Thornfield Hall at the end of the novel.

LOVE STORY

Define concept of romantic love

You could consider sexual love, divine love and familial / fraternal love as aspects of this novel as well. For example what kind of love exists between Helen and Jane? What kind of love exists between Adele and Jane? What kind of love does Bertha Mason represent do you think?

Romanticism is different from romantic love

Comment on broad range of episodes

Also a rite of passage story

Refer to inner turmoil battle between reason and passion. Referring to St John and Rochester would be an appropriate comparison to make in this essay.

Refer to key episodes - fire in the bedroom, Bertha's attack on Mr Mason, the proposal,

Be aware of different kinds of love

 
 
DEFINITION
IDEAS
Romantic Love
 
Romance is the pleasurable feeling from an emotional attraction towards another person associated with love.
 Romance usually implies an expression of ones deep and strong emotional desires to connect with another person intimately.
 Rochester and Jane
 
seemingly unobtainable love
 
restricted access to the beloved
 
self sacrifice - suffering
Divine Love
 
defined by God’s love for his creation. This was fully expressed in the death and resurrection of Jesus Christ. Love defined by self- sacrifice and selfless acts in the world.
 Brocklehurst
 
Helen Burns
 
St John Rivers
Sexual Love
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
A strong physical desire to be in close, intimate contact with someone.
 Jane's passionate nature expressed towards Rochester
 
Bertha Mason is pure passion
Familial Love
 
means affectionate regard or friendship. It is a dispassionate virtuous love. It includes loyalty to friends, family, and community, and requires virtue, equality and familiarity
 Jane and Helen
 
Jane and Diana and Mary and St John
 
Jane and Mrs Reed and John Reed