AS LL - FEEDBACK STREETCAR ANALYSIS TASK
Lots of good things found in your answers these include:
- Generally well written answers - sentences, paragraphs, introductions, concluding statements
- Most people focused on two or three key episodes well
- Everyone referred to a range of frameworks in your paragraph analysis
- Most people referred well to the question - although some preferred to write about the women
Some important points to consider for Friday
- Write analytical, concise and detailed paragraphs
- Use more technical terms when commenting on quotations
- Make sure your comments on quotations includes what effects specific language features have on an audience and other characters
- Be very selective about what you write about - I was surprised how few of you wrote about the rape in scene 10
- Write about what you consider to be the most impressive and important points first of all. Don't write about the play chronologically from scene 1.
- Avoid writing long quotations
- You are not writing an essay
- Use brief introductory and concluding statements
- Write a series of logical and coherent paragraphs - loosely linked by topic
