ELLA 1 INTEGRATED ANALYSIS AND TEXT PRODUCTION
INTEGRATED ANALYSIS PRAGRAPHS – SPIES
TASK 1
In your paragraph you should include;
- A topic sentence
- Introduce quotation – briefly
- Quote
- Comments should include 2 language features - one of these should be literary, the effect of these on a reader and a reference to the narrative view point.
“’Or perhaps ‘she says softly, ‘she’s taking a message to Mrs Tracey’s boyfriend’.
Now I do turn to look at her, too uncomprehending to conceal it. Auntie Dee’s boyfriend? What’s she talking about? How can someone’s aunt have a boyfriend?
Didn’t you know?’ whispers Barbara. ‘Deidre’s seen her kissing him. In the blackout. She went up to the tunnel with you brother and there they were.’”
TASK 2
Using the extract below write up a second analytical paragraph in response to the above question.
This extract comes from page 178
“’ I know how terrible it is to have to ask you, Stephen. I shouldn’t do it if there were any other way.
I feel so…
The words stop. I look up to see what’s happened. Her hands are pressed to her mouth, and her eyes are filling with tears. Two almost inaudible words finally escape through her fingers; ‘So ashamed.’”
TASK 3
Swap paragraphs with the person sitting next to you and write a mark and a comment on them